a haiku a day

keeps obtuseness away

Forced

Posted on January 22, 2008 by gimble

Disappointment like
a kidney punch makes it hard
to smile through the pain.

3 thoughts on “Forced”

gimble on January 23, 2008 at 9:56 pm said:

I don’t know… Mr. Queasy is making my stomach turn with his talent. But thank you Bonnie. Always good to hear from you.

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Bonnie on January 23, 2008 at 9:32 pm said:

This haiku really hits home. Who can’t relate to disappointment that you must shine through?

Your haikus as so insightful and so real.

Bonnie

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Mr. Queasy on January 22, 2008 at 10:05 pm said:

Bitter details can
only make the sweetest things
taste all the more sweet.

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