greatness revealed in
the sound of splinters, words that
pierce my jealous eyes.
haiku envy
greatness revealed in
the sound of splinters, words that
pierce my jealous eyes.
greatness revealed in
the sound of splinters, words that
pierce my jealous eyes.
Typo in left column – I know you’d want to know. That is, “haikus” is not a word. Some of your readers may accidently pick it up, so you may want to remind them that haiku, like deer, is singluar or plural as needed.
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Wow! I never thought I’d see my site name mentioned in a haiku. Thanks so much! I’m glad you liked what you found there. I dropped by to tell you that I’d added you to my links list so I can keep track of you.
I think haiku comes in many forms – from the traditional (Basho etc) to the modernist (Kerouac etc) and we all sit on the spectrum somewhere. Youre in a slightly different place than me, but we can appreciate and envy each other!
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